Book #268 of 2020:
Don’t Call the Wolf by Aleksandra Ross
The main problem with this standalone fantasy novel is that none of its characters seems to have a clear motivation driving their actions, resulting in a narrative with the shape of a quest but less weight than a typical tabletop roleplaying campaign. They’re just vaguely hunting for a dragon because that’s what heroes do, I guess. I’ve seen other readers criticize the ending too, although for me it was no more poorly set-up than the rest of the story.
The second biggest issue is that the central romance is basically love at first sight, with both viewpoint protagonists fully aware of their feelings, but still blushing and fretting for most of the book instead of doing anything about it. It’s a behavior that might make sense if there were something in the plot keeping these two apart, but debut author Aleksandra Ross never quite gets around to telling us what that would be. There’s no build-up or catharsis to when they eventually kiss, since we lack any reason for why it’s taken so long after they’ve spent countless chapters plainly wanting one another as they trek side-by-side through the woods.
But the element that irritates me the most is probably the worldbuilding, which draws on Slavic folklore yet isn’t particularly well-defined overall. One detail that Ross makes a point of mentioning, however? That certain ghoulish monsters are the tormented souls of unbaptized children, an idea that’s pretty shockingly offensive to non-Christians like me for a writer to draft into the rules for this setting. (And despite the unfamiliar countries and presence of magic, it appears that we are meant to understand the place as a version of medieval Europe, given the mention of crosses and churches elsewhere in the text.)
I’m sorry, but it’s 2020. Publisher HarperTeen has no excuse for putting out such a low-quality work with no apparent editing for sensitivity.
[Content warning: In addition to the above, the underage heroine ends up accidentally naked in front of people on multiple occasions.]
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