Book #148 of 2020:
Promise of Blood by Brian McClellan (Powder Mage #1)
The plot to this 2013 fantasy debut reminds me of the second Mistborn novel, from the challenges facing a force of rebels after they successfully overthrow their tyrant ruler and must figure out how to govern amid the dying warning of a greater danger, to the threat of a secret traitor (er… double traitor? reverse traitor?) hidden in their midst. Adding to the Brandon Sanderson resemblance, there are also multiple magic systems — including one that involves swallowing gunpowder to telekinetically control bullets — and some mythic god-beings returning to humanity after centuries away.
And it all works as an homage to that style, but the parts that showcase author Brian McClellan’s originality are somewhat disappointing. I want so much more for and from the women in this story, who are generally positioned as either beauties for men to ogle, children for men to protect, or villains for men to defeat, with little evidence of interiority or depth. At best, they sometimes move from one category to another, as when a protagonist’s mute ‘savage’ companion conveys to him that she is actually nineteen and not fifteen, and his appreciation immediately blooms into attraction.
Another hero is supposed to be a military genius, without whom we are told the tenuous new peace would swiftly fall apart. This man walks into an ambush on at least three separate occasions in this text, two of which even feature a subordinate directly raising the possibility beforehand and getting patronizingly rebuffed. That’s a poor piece of characterization in and of itself, but it becomes downright comical when you consider that that’s the male standard which the female roles are largely written to support.
I’ve debated between rating this book as two stars or three, and in the end I do think it’s strong enough to merit the higher score, despite the above issues. The worldbuilding is interesting, a few personal arcs have potential, and the sorcery action delivers some unexpected thrills. I don’t feel any strong need to continue on to the sequel, but I wouldn’t absolutely rule out picking it up at some point either, in the hope that McClellan has matured as a writer in the meantime.
[Content warning for death of a dog and mention of rape and sexual slavery.]
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★★★☆☆
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