
Book #120 of 2023:
Iron Flame by Rebecca Yarros (The Empyrean #2)
A surprisingly-quick sequel to May’s runaway ‘romantasy’ bestseller Fourth Wing, but I suppose the publisher wanted to strike while the iron was hot — no pun intended. This one is just as great, although truth be told, it probably could have been half the length, especially given that accelerated release schedule. At 623 pages in hardback, it’s even longer than its predecessor, and it also falls into more of a discrete two-part structure, with various plots and tensions building to a natural climax midway through the text and resulting in a massive status quo change for the series that easily rivals the cliffhanger ending to book one. As an editor, I likely would have pushed for this volume to end there, and for the remainder of the narrative to have been saved for the next sequel after another six months. And as a reader, I likely would have awarded such a novel a full five stars, as it’s considerably stronger than the somewhat more padded material that follows in this one.
But let’s back up a second. The debut title in this series introduced a dragon-rider cadet in her first year at a literally-cutthroat academy where both the coursework and the fellow students regularly kill a large portion of each graduating class. Though originally trained to be a scribe, she made it through unscathed (at least physically), fell in love with the resident bad boy, and learned some society-shaking secrets about the larger war effort along the way. This sequel finds the heroine reentering her school nevertheless, which is a bit of a relief — I’ll try to keep the Harry Potter comparisons to a minimum, but the framework of daily assignments and schoolyard rivalries helps scaffold the ongoing story as it did in that famous wizarding saga, and is similarly missed when it eventually falls away. This book especially calls to mind The Order of the Phoenix, given that Violet is now in an openly antagonistic situation with a few particular teachers and their lackeys, who abuse and flat-out torture her under guise of the accepted rules.
The back half of the novel is a little messier, though the action in the battlefield and the bedroom alike is still pretty well-written. It gets harder to put up with certain flaws in both the protagonist and her beau, however, each of whom is doing that tiresome ‘keeping secrets from my loved ones in order to protect them even as they beg me to open up’ nonsense and occasionally falling prey to standard rom-com miscommunication woes. There’s a lot of repeated breaking up and making up in the central relationship, which at some point starts registering as clear manufactured drama rather than serious conflict with actual stakes. At least there’s a deadly enemy on the horizon and numerous significant character deaths to remind us of what really matters.
But I’m a fantasy reader at heart, not a romance guy. While the steamy bits are fine, it’s primarily the dragons and their bonded humans that I’m here for, and on that front, this volume is a definite success. I wonder how long we’ll have to wait until book 3?
[Content warning for gore.]
★★★★☆
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