
Book #30 of 2023:
The Afterward by E. K. Johnston
I like the idea of following up with a band of adventurers after they’ve completed their quest to save the world, and all the more so that our focus is on a pair of young women who became romantically entwined on that adventure but are now apart and dealing with their separate smaller crises. One, a thief, finds herself too recognizable to still carry off any big jobs in that profession, yet unfortunately neither qualified nor inclined to do much of anything else for work. The other, a knight-in-training, is honorbound to marry someone soon to pay off her debts — likely with the aim of producing heirs, even though she is not attracted to men. But they can’t seem to stay away from one another, no matter how much it hurts for each to see the beloved she can no longer be with.
That portion of the novel is fine. But it’s accompanied by a great many flashbacks to the backstory, few of which manage to deepen the characters or inform their present beyond what the initial premise already established. This section of the narrative is also significantly thinner, relying on reader familiarity with genre tropes to fill in the blanks with the appropriate archetypes. And I wish the later chapters wouldn’t throw another big magical threat into the plot, since the appeal for me until that point had been the lower stakes of the domestic drama. Although the publisher’s description of this title promises “a tale both sweepingly epic and intensely personal,” in my opinion the balance between those two elements is off, and the latter is by far the stronger.
[Content warning for gore and parental death.]
★★★☆☆
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