Book #156 of 2022:
Our Missing Hearts by Celeste Ng
An unexpected misfire from acclaimed author Celeste Ng. While it’s clear this novel is a very personal project that she’s poured a lot of herself into, and the anti-Asian bigotry throughout is as painful to read as intended, there’s just not much story or character here. The setting of a dystopian near-future America is chilling enough, in an ‘It Can’t Happen Here‘ sense, as the writer has absolutely captured the ways in which overt fascism could take root under the guise of patriotic U.S. values (to a greater extent than it already has, of course). But it’s not a great sign that that’s the strongest part of the title, since it has significant issues itself.
The basic premise is that a trade war with China has led domestic xenophobia to spike and oppressive legislation to be passed, tightening government control over school / library materials and mandating that children can be removed from parents deemed unsuitable along any ambiguous ideological criteria. It’s all scarily plausible, with plenty of historical and modern parallels, although there’s weirdly no discussion of some of the marginalized populations who in reality would be hurt the most by such a move: queer, non-Christian, disabled, etc. Child separation in the book is seemingly motivated only by racism, which feels like a real misunderstanding of how right-wing extremism tends to target and harm all minority identities alike even when some are more of a locus than others.
Against this backdrop, we are presented with two protagonists. The first, a twelve-year-old boy, has no particular plot arc other than experiencing the uneasy times and vaguely searching for more information about his mother, who walked out on him and his dad three years ago and now appears to be a public enemy of some kind. Then midway through the text when he finds her, we switch mostly to her perspective, filling in the family and society backstory more fully.
And she’s a pretty odious person, in a way that the narrative never seems to understand or confront. Her major crime, beyond being Chinese American, turns out to have been writing a bit of poetry that’s caught on amongst protesters and subsequently been banned. Justifiably afraid that the authorities would seize her son if she continued her regular life, she leaves her husband to raise him alone, with no reason given for why the two couldn’t have simply accompanied her wherever she’s fled. Shortly thereafter, she knocks on the door of a Black couple whose daughter was shot and killed at a march holding a sign with her words on it, centering her own pain despite how minuscule it must be compared to theirs. She even characterizes herself to them as having lost a child too, when, again, she is the one who walked away from her very much still living nine-year-old!
It’s hard to believe we’re meant to sympathize with this angsty poet and deadbeat mom, despite how she reads like an uncritical author stand-in. When she first reconnects with her boy, she’s engaged in a mysterious project involving hiding things on the street when the police aren’t looking. Has she joined a terrorist / resistance cell? Is this some sort of violent direct-action praxis against the horrible status quo? Spoiler alert: no, not really. She’s merely putting out a network of portable speakers, which culminates in her broadcasting stories of missing children until the connection is traced back and she’s (presumably) detained. That’s the big achievement she’s thrown away her family and years of her life for — a brief address that only a limited number of passersby could have even heard, and which could have been easily printed or distributed online to a wider audience with a fraction of the effort, time, and risk. It would be a strange development even if it led to a reckoning with her negligent parenting behavior, but instead it’s cast as a bittersweet triumph that may someday contribute to a shift in the tide of public opinion.
Ng has enough baseline competence as an author, sympathy for families in turmoil, and pointed observations about how close we are to a full-on McCarthyist nightmare that the resulting novel is not a complete loss, but it’s nowhere near the quality of her previous work. I give this 1.5 stars, reluctantly rounded up.
[Content warning for rape.]
★★☆☆☆
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