Book #203 of 2020:
The Illearth War by Stephen R. Donaldson (The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant, the Unbeliever #2)
This fantasy sequel is structured somewhat like The Empire Strikes Back, a downbeat middle chapter that recontextualizes an earlier victory as a minor skirmish and not the decisive blow it may have seemed. In Lord Foul’s Bane, the leper Thomas Covenant found himself transported to a world he could neither accept nor reject, a tension that appears sublimated when his quest for a powerful relic reaches fruition and he reawakens to his regular life. Yet here we discover him staggering under the psychological aftereffects of that experience, and soon summoned back to the Land to aid its denizens once more.
In that other plane, forty years have passed, and the prophesied doom is nearly upon it. The anguished traveler is again put in the impossible position of sacrificing his tenuous stability for what may be just a dream, while also confronting the ramifications of his own foul sin, the rape of a young woman on his previous visit. He now recognizes and repudiates the crime, but is unprepared to face the intolerable forgiveness of his new daughter, let alone the dawning apocalypse of her precious realm. (As ever, author Stephen R. Donaldson is aiming to satisfy the dual readings of his antihero’s plight: as the Unbeliever’s torment increases, so too does the peril facing his prospective allies, since the latter could be nothing but a delusional allegory for the former.)
I have two major issues with this text, despite it being overall quite strong and an integral part of a series that I love. Primarily, I struggle with the character of Elena, who doesn’t merely absolve her father for violating her mother, but also expresses romantic feelings for him in turn — to the awful extent of kissing and reassuring him that he cannot ravish her because she would welcome his touch. Although he rightly refuses her advances, their mere existence is a bizarre writing choice that is more uncomfortable than I think the writer intends, and one that makes her less convincing as a real person of legible motivation. I can’t even defend it on narrative grounds as I believe I can the rape; it’s simply an odd element which I have never really understood.
Secondly, after a debut novel spent almost entirely locked in one point of view, about half of this volume is told from the perspective of the new protagonist Hile Troy — a figure likewise drawn from our reality, yet without the same compulsion to resist the invoked appeal — or that of a native inhabitant like Lord Mhoram or Bannor. The Warmark’s section of the story is a grand adventure in its own right and another lovely showcase of the mingled beauty and sorrow of the setting, but I just don’t find him as engaging or dynamic of a presence for that journey. Not to mention, I feel the interpretation that these events are all in Covenant’s mind is substantially weakened by the inclusion of anyone else’s interior monologue — though that admittedly only impacts a reader’s perception and not his own.
Still, the worldbuilding remains exquisitely Tolkienesque, and the plot drifts further from seeming like a generic Lord of the Rings imitation (a critique I consider simplistic but possible for the first book). Both trilogies reflect a dwindling glory from a rich history, with mortals keenly aware of their inadequacy to meet the moment and live up to the legends who have come before. I treasure the Land as much as I care for the well-being of its reluctant champion, and by maintaining that taut balance, Donaldson continues to boldly reconfigure what the genre can do.
[Content warning for suicide, genocide, and gore.]
★★★★☆
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