
Book #170 of 2020:
The War Within by Stephen R. Donaldson (The Great God’s War #2)
I’m not quite loving this fantasy trilogy, but the second volume is a major improvement, offering an expansive plot of castle intrigue and warfare preparations in place of the somewhat stilted morality play of the first novel. The addition of further viewpoint figures helps too, and although we’re still stuck in a small corner of the map as great deeds happen elsewhere, the worldbuilding seems more complete, with kingdoms who know of their neighbors (who would know of their own neighbors, etc.).
Author Stephen R. Donaldson often creates characters rigidly governed by the oblique strictures they’ve imposed on themselves, which I find interesting in a literary sense even when I can’t really relate to their struggles. Here, for instance, his returning protagonist Bifalt feels he’s been reduced to a tool by the events of Seventh Decimate, forced onto a path where he can only seek honor in the total abnegation of agency. That’s a fascinating sort of ideology with clear shades of Donaldson’s classic antihero Thomas Covenant — yet for the most part, this series showcases the writer rhyming and riffing on his favorite themes, rather than outright repeating himself.
This title is a high three-out-of-five stars for me, falling short merely in that its middle-book storyline features a lot of setup for the finale at the expense of rewarding payoff in the present. A few threads in particular are left without any satisfying immediate climax, and while I’m fairly invested in their ultimate resolution, I do wish we had more of a taste of it right now.
★★★☆☆
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