
Book #169 of 2024:
Mother-Daughter Murder Night by Nina Simon
I saw this book pitched as the Gilmore girls investigating a murder, and that’s honestly a pretty decent shorthand for the character dynamics at play: a small-town fifteen-year-old who discovers the body and is initially considered a suspect, the single mom who had her as a teen, and her own estranged mother, long-divorced and now living with them temporarily while undergoing cancer treatments. Besides the genre, it does feel somewhat similar to that TV show, although the main focus here is on the Diet Coke-guzzling* grandmother who decides to do some Marple-esque sleuthing to clear her granddaughter’s name, with the teenager herself registering as a definite afterthought.
Unfortunately, the plot isn’t as engaging as the interactions among the family, and the mystery element is straightforwardly predictable despite how long certain reveals are dragged out. The investigation also hinges on a few providential strokes of luck, like the protagonist happening to wake up in the middle of the night and look out her window or attending a funeral for someone she didn’t even know who turns out to be relevant to the case. (As a general principle, I stand by the writing advice that your heroes should stumble over bad fortune more often than good and be largely responsible for earning their victories through active choices and struggles.) And while it’s a minor issue, I’m disappointed by the paltry Jewish representation on display, which is mostly limited to surface mentions of holidays like Chanukah gifts or Passover visits with no further detail or exploration of what the identity means to any of these women. (If you can find-and-replace in your manuscript to easily swap out one culture’s attributes for another, you haven’t really done the work to ground that characteristic in anything meaningful.) At least author Nina Simon does a better job addressing the racism in the community, and how a brown kid like Jack — she has an absentee Filipino father — faces obstacles that her more privileged elders do not.
The vibes are strong enough for a passing three-out-of-five stars from me, but on a story level, I’m afraid I’m rather underwhelmed.
*Seriously, her drink of choice is mentioned no fewer than 15 times in this novel. What a strange character quirk to emphasize that way!
★★★☆☆
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