
Book #95 of 2024:
The Will of the Many by James Islington (The Hierarchy #1)
This fantasy novel starts off strong and gets even better from there, spinning a tale that’s rather reminiscent of Red Rising in both its Roman-inflected worldbuilding and its rage-filled protagonist infiltrating the high society of his enemies (and subsequently feeling conflicted over the friendships that he builds there). But unlike Darrow, Vis isn’t merely a member of the oppressed underclass; he’s also the deposed and presumed-dead heir of a smaller nation that the dominant civilization conquered, lending him a further degree of private stakes in the matter more like Sage in The False Prince. In fact, one of the things I love most about this series debut concerns all of the factions and divided loyalties that the young orphan hero must secretly juggle: there’s his cover story as an ordinary student trying to rise through the ranks of the cutthroat academy, the mission his powerful adopted father has sent him on — under threat of imprisonment and torture — to discreetly investigate a deadly conspiracy at the school, his own true identity that would mark him for execution if anyone ever found out, and the rebel group who have learned of it and are blackmailing him for their own hypocritical ends.
The magical element is neat too, although oddly dropped for a large section of the book, since students aren’t allowed to utilize it on-campus. Early on, however, we’re briefed on the mechanics: people are organized into pyramid-like hierarchies, ceding a portion of their energy to the members above them in exchange for social benefit. The higher-ranked individuals can draw upon the lower to gain disproportionate physical strength, or else to power the country’s machinery like Sandersonian investiture. While not a major focus of the plot, it’s a fun background note that helps distinguish the setting in a crowded literary landscape.
Mostly, though, we are following the very personal journey of our narrator as he outwits and ruthlessly outfights his way through a succession of tricky scenarios. At every moment, this character is thinking not only of how he can turn the present situation to his advantage, but also how it could fuel his growing legendary reputation among his peers. (Again: heavy vibes of Darrow from Red Rising, alongside the tensely unfair wargame challenges of Fourth Wing, The Hunger Games, or Ender’s Game.)
The ending unfortunately loses me a bit. There are just too many threads left unresolved, as well as a pretty massive genre-bending twist in the final pages that would have needed way more development than it receives here in order to land with the proper impact. I understand multiple sequels are planned and cliffhangers are a fine storytelling tradition, but this volume ends so messily that I’m forced to scale back the five-star rating I spent a lot of the book assuming I’d be giving it.
Still! I do like this title a lot overall, and will be eagerly reading on to see where the series goes next.
[Content warning for amputation and gore.]
★★★★☆
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