
Book #103 of 2023:
Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros (The Empyrean #1)
The majority of this fantasy novel is pretty terrific, a fine addition to that thriving sub-genre of speculative fiction about specialized academies that blatantly allow/encourage/require their enterprising cadets to murder one another to get ahead (Ender’s Game, Battle Royale, The Scholomance, Red Rising, etc.). In this case, the students are enrolled for a chance to become dragon-riders, the most prestigious order of their nation’s military, and the training is literally cutthroat for the limited number of matches available. The protagonist is at a distinct disadvantage here, both by being physically smaller and weaker than her peers and by having been suddenly thrust into the program after years of assuming her parents would let her study to be a scribe instead. However, she proves to be a determined and capable young woman in this new arena, and her fierce embrace of the curriculum’s challenges is quite endearing. Author Rebecca Yarros also draws on her background as a romance writer to pen a scorching enemies-to-lovers arc with the resident bad boy, the captured son of an executed rebel leader.
Those scenes can get fairly graphic, which isn’t a problem in and of itself, yet rings oddly in a story that otherwise has so many traditional YA hallmarks. (The heroine is twenty, but she’s very much coming of age and learning to push back against her mother’s generation in this book. She’s even caught up in a tired love triangle for a while, although the other fellow isn’t ever sold as a convincing alternative in my opinion, even before he turns more controlling and unwilling to listen to her on anything.) I’d also critique the ending for being too fast-paced and filled with hairpin twists that aren’t given enough room to be properly unpacked, from character betrayals and big secrets coming to light to Sandersonian-style reveals about worldbuilding and societal misinformation. And I wonder whether the general’s daughter is the most effective choice as a viewpoint into all this: she gradually learns, predictably enough, that there’s more to the rebellion of the backstory than she’s been told all her life, and that the rebels’ orphaned children are not necessarily evil, but a plot that rooted readers in that group’s perspective from the start might have been more engaging. As written, this is somewhat like a version of The Hunger Games set in the Capitol that only belatedly incorporates an outsider like Katniss.
Those nitpicks aside, I have generally enjoyed this title, and especially getting to know Violet, her friends, and the local dragons, who can psychically bond with their chosen humans and bestow magical gifts upon them. There’s a lot that the volume does well, both in service to the immediate narrative of her first year in the training corps and in setting up threads for the remainder of the series. It’s a little too messy for me to give this effort my highest rating or a complete rave review, but I’m definitely looking forward to the sequel.
[Content warning for gore.]
★★★★☆
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